{"id":2319666,"date":"2026-03-09T14:10:20","date_gmt":"2026-03-09T14:10:20","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/celebrity.land\/en\/?p=2319666"},"modified":"2026-03-09T14:10:20","modified_gmt":"2026-03-09T14:10:20","slug":"mormon-wives-star-mayci-neeley-responds-to-criticism-that-her-memoir-is-poorly-written-exclusive","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/celebrity.land\/en\/mormon-wives-star-mayci-neeley-responds-to-criticism-that-her-memoir-is-poorly-written-exclusive\/","title":{"rendered":"\u201cMormon Wives\u201d Star Mayci Neeley Responds to Criticism That Her Memoir Is &#8216;Poorly Written&#8217; (Exclusive)"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><\/p>\n<div>\n<figure class=\"content-figure flex justify-center mb-[1em] mx-auto\">\n<div style=\"max-width:1242px\">\n<div class=\"content-image\"><\/div><figcaption class=\"fig-caption\">\n<p><i>Mayci Neeley<br \/>Credit: Disney\/Natalie Cass<\/i><\/p>\n<\/figcaption><\/div>\n<\/figure>\n<h3 class=\"heading\">NEED TO KNOW<\/h3>\n<ul class=\"content-list\">\n<li>\n<div class=\"\">\n<p>Mayci Neeley responded to critics of her memoir, <em>Told You So<\/em>, which she released last year<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/li>\n<li>\n<div class=\"\">\n<p>Speaking to PEOPLE, the <em>Secret Lives of Mormon Wives<\/em> star acknowledges that she\u2019s seen criticism by readers that the memoir is \u201cso poorly written\u201d or \u201cso elementary\u201d<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/li>\n<li>\n<div class=\"\">\n<p>Neeley maintains that the writing style is \u201chow it was supposed to be\u201d \u2014 akin to a diary<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p><a rel=\"nofollow\" target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/www.aol.com\/lifestyle\/mayci-neeley-breaks-down-misconceptions-210025925.html\" rel=\"nofollow noopener\" target=\"_blank\" data-ylk=\"slk:Mayci Neeley;elm:context_link;itc:0;sec:content-canvas\" class=\"link rapid-noclick-resp\">Mayci Neeley<\/a> has heard the critics of her memoir \u2014\u00a0and she thinks they didn\u2019t understand her vision.<\/p>\n<p>Last year, <a rel=\"nofollow\" target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/www.aol.com\/lifestyle\/secret-lives-mormon-wives-true-143000594.html\" rel=\"nofollow noopener\" target=\"_blank\" data-ylk=\"slk:The Secret Lives of Mormon Wives;elm:context_link;itc:0;sec:content-canvas\" class=\"link rapid-noclick-resp\"><em>The Secret Lives of Mormon Wives<\/em><\/a> star, 31, <a rel=\"nofollow\" target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/www.aol.com\/lifestyle\/secret-lives-mormon-wives-star-160000020.html\" rel=\"nofollow noopener\" target=\"_blank\" data-ylk=\"slk:published;elm:context_link;itc:0;sec:content-canvas\" class=\"link rapid-noclick-resp\">published<\/a> her debut book: a memoir, titled <em>Told You So<\/em>, that charts her teenage years growing up Mormon, losing the father of her first child in a car accident while she was pregnant and the breakout success of MomTok over the last few years.<\/p>\n<p>Ahead of <em>Mormon Wives <\/em>season 4, which streams on Hulu on March 12, she&#8217;s reflecting on the book\u2019s launch and promotion,\u00a0which was on the heels of her <a rel=\"nofollow\" target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/www.aol.com\/lifestyle\/secret-lives-mormon-wives-mayci-233445440.html\" rel=\"nofollow noopener\" target=\"_blank\" data-ylk=\"slk:giving birth to baby No. 3;elm:context_link;itc:0;sec:content-canvas\" class=\"link rapid-noclick-resp\">giving birth to baby No. 3<\/a> in July.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cThe best part [of releasing the book] is seeing how many women have DMed me and how many people it\u2019s impacted,\u201d she tells PEOPLE. \u201cI think that\u2019s the coolest part of it.\u201d<\/p>\n<figure class=\"content-figure flex justify-center mb-[1em] mx-auto\">\n<div style=\"max-width:1242px\">\n<div class=\"content-image\"><img alt=\"'Secret Lives of Mormon Wives' Cast MembersCredit: Disney\/Fred Hayes\" loading=\"lazy\" width=\"1242\" height=\"829\" decoding=\"async\" data-nimg=\"1\" class=\"standard-img w-full w-full h-auto\" style=\"color:transparent\" src=\"https:\/\/s.yimg.com\/ny\/api\/res\/1.2\/1lPqD5wD278KsP2pVWkh4Q--\/YXBwaWQ9aGlnaGxhbmRlcjt3PTEyNDI7aD04Mjk-\/https:\/\/media.zenfs.com\/en\/aol_people_articles_471\/4e6221c574a95f9159bf74eea02c9bb4\"\/><\/div><figcaption class=\"fig-caption\">\n<p><i>&#8216;Secret Lives of Mormon Wives&#8217; Cast Members<br \/>Credit: Disney\/Fred Hayes<\/i><\/p>\n<\/figcaption><\/div>\n<\/figure>\n<p>But it hasn\u2019t been all sunshine and rainbows: Neeley acknowledges that she\u2019s seen criticism by readers that the memoir is \u201cso poorly written\u201d or \u201cso elementary.\u201d But the reality TV star maintains that the writing style is \u201chow it was supposed to be\u201d \u2014 akin to a diary.<\/p>\n<p>\u201cI\u2019m not writing super eloquently in it, you know what I mean?\u201d she says. \u201cI\u2019m just writing down my thoughts in that moment. So I think that some people maybe didn\u2019t understand that.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Still, Neeley says it\u2019s been \u201chard\u201d to hear some of the backlash: \u201cI put it all out there, and then I get a lot of criticism for the writing style and stuff. And it\u2019s like, well, OK. It was supposed to be like a diary.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>\u201cBut other than that,\u201d concludes the reality TV star, \u201cthe impact is so much louder than the criticism, and it\u2019s been honestly amazing overall. I\u2019m really happy I did it.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Beyond Neeley\u2019s book launch, <em>Mormon Wives\u2019<\/em> fourth season promises an inside look at the months leading up to <a rel=\"nofollow\" target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/www.aol.com\/lifestyle\/taylor-frankie-paul-says-shes-183847700.html\" rel=\"nofollow noopener\" target=\"_blank\" data-ylk=\"slk:Taylor Frankie Paul\u2019s;elm:context_link;itc:0;sec:content-canvas\" class=\"link rapid-noclick-resp\">Taylor Frankie Paul\u2019s<\/a> <a rel=\"nofollow\" target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/www.aol.com\/lifestyle\/bachelorette-revealed-mom-3-secret-090203663.html\" rel=\"nofollow noopener\" target=\"_blank\" data-ylk=\"slk:search for love;elm:context_link;itc:0;sec:content-canvas\" class=\"link rapid-noclick-resp\">search for love<\/a> as the leading lady on <a rel=\"nofollow\" target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/www.aol.com\/lifestyle\/bachelorette-season-22-everything-know-123000322.html\" rel=\"nofollow noopener\" target=\"_blank\" data-ylk=\"slk:The Bachelorette;elm:context_link;itc:0;sec:content-canvas\" class=\"link rapid-noclick-resp\"><em>The Bachelorette<\/em><\/a>.<\/p>\n<p>Several castmates weighed in on Paul&#8217;s upcoming appearance, with Neeley being a bit more skeptical about the milestone.<\/p>\n<figure class=\"content-figure flex justify-center mb-[1em] mx-auto\">\n<div style=\"max-width:318px\">\n<div class=\"content-image\"><img alt=\"'Told You So' by Mayci Neeley\" loading=\"lazy\" width=\"318\" height=\"480\" decoding=\"async\" data-nimg=\"1\" class=\"standard-img w-full w-full h-auto\" style=\"color:transparent\" src=\"https:\/\/s.yimg.com\/ny\/api\/res\/1.2\/dSI2umoKZ2GttDFCY9X_Nw--\/YXBwaWQ9aGlnaGxhbmRlcjt3PTQyMDtoPTYzNA--\/https:\/\/media.zenfs.com\/en\/aol_people_articles_471\/f63a198be0825e8b5216dd819ed57812\"\/><\/div><figcaption class=\"fig-caption\">\n<p><i>&#8216;Told You So&#8217; by Mayci Neeley<\/i><\/p>\n<\/figcaption><\/div>\n<\/figure>\n<p>\u201cI don\u2019t think she\u2019s ready,\u201d <a rel=\"nofollow\" target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/www.aol.com\/lifestyle\/mormon-wives-cast-weigh-taylor-150000241.html\" rel=\"nofollow noopener\" target=\"_blank\" data-ylk=\"slk:Neeley says of Paul;elm:context_link;itc:0;sec:content-canvas\" class=\"link rapid-noclick-resp\">Neeley says of Paul<\/a>, whose road to love stars airing later this month. \u201cI think she\u2019s nervous, and also we\u2019re nervous for her.\u201d<\/p>\n<p><strong>Never miss a story \u2014 sign up for<\/strong><a rel=\"nofollow\" target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/people.com\/people-news-daily-newsletter-sign-up-8692701\" rel=\"nofollow noopener\" target=\"_blank\" data-ylk=\"slk:PEOPLE's free daily newsletter;elm:context_link;itc:0;sec:content-canvas\" class=\"link rapid-noclick-resp\"><strong> PEOPLE&#8217;s free daily newsletter<\/strong><\/a><strong> to stay up-to-date on the best of what PEOPLE has to offer\u200b\u200b, from celebrity news to compelling human interest stories.\u00a0\u00a0<\/strong><\/p>\n<p>\u201cIf I were her, I would be nervous, but I think it&#8217;s gonna be great TV,\u201d adds <a rel=\"nofollow\" target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/www.aol.com\/lifestyle\/mikayla-matthews-parents-everything-secret-223000929.html\" rel=\"nofollow noopener\" target=\"_blank\" data-ylk=\"slk:Mikayla Matthews;elm:context_link;itc:0;sec:content-canvas\" class=\"link rapid-noclick-resp\">Mikayla Matthews<\/a>. \u201cI think it\u2019s going to be entertaining.\u201d<\/p>\n<figure class=\"content-figure flex justify-center mb-[1em] mx-auto\">\n<div style=\"max-width:1242px\">\n<div class=\"content-image\"><img alt=\"'Secret Lives of Mormon Wives' Cast MembersCredit: Disney\/Fred Hayes\" loading=\"lazy\" width=\"1242\" height=\"829\" decoding=\"async\" data-nimg=\"1\" class=\"standard-img w-full w-full h-auto\" style=\"color:transparent\" src=\"https:\/\/s.yimg.com\/ny\/api\/res\/1.2\/0RzaEPTh6Q30q0d4rk8BEA--\/YXBwaWQ9aGlnaGxhbmRlcjt3PTEyNDI7aD04Mjk-\/https:\/\/media.zenfs.com\/en\/aol_people_articles_471\/0c8655aa725b083b6efc146b8d3c6927\"\/><\/div><figcaption class=\"fig-caption\">\n<p><i>&#8216;Secret Lives of Mormon Wives&#8217; Cast Members<br \/>Credit: Disney\/Fred Hayes<\/i><\/p>\n<\/figcaption><\/div>\n<\/figure>\n<p>\u201cI think something that&#8217;s so great about Taylor is that she&#8217;s willing to put her whole life out there \u2014 the good, the bad, the scandals, the dirty, the ugly, she&#8217;ll put everything out there,\u201d says <a rel=\"nofollow\" target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/people.com\/whitney-leavitt-11859284\" rel=\"nofollow noopener\" target=\"_blank\" data-ylk=\"slk:Whitney Leavitt;elm:context_link;itc:0;sec:content-canvas\" class=\"link rapid-noclick-resp\">Whitney Leavitt<\/a>. \u201cSo I think, at the end of the day, she&#8217;s gonna be happy, because I would assume she was her authentic self.\u201d<\/p>\n<p>Read the original article on <a rel=\"nofollow\" target=\"_blank\" href=\"https:\/\/people.com\/mayci-neeley-responds-to-criticism-over-her-memoir-exclusive-11921084\" rel=\"nofollow noopener\" target=\"_blank\" data-ylk=\"slk:People;elm:context_link;itc:0;sec:content-canvas\" class=\"link rapid-noclick-resp\">People<\/a><\/p>\n<\/div>\n<p><em> \u2018 The preceding article may include information circulated by third parties \u2019 <\/em><\/p>\n<p><em> \u2018 Some details of this article were extracted from the following source www.aol.com \u2019 <\/em><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Mayci NeeleyCredit: Disney\/Natalie Cass NEED TO KNOW Mayci Neeley responded to critics of her memoir, Told You So, which she released last year Speaking to PEOPLE, the Secret Lives of Mormon Wives star acknowledges that she\u2019s seen criticism by readers that the memoir is \u201cso poorly written\u201d or \u201cso elementary\u201d Neeley maintains that the writing [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":2319667,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"om_disable_all_campaigns":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"jnews-multi-image_gallery":[],"jnews_single_post":[],"jnews_primary_category":[],"jnews_social_meta":[],"footnotes":""},"categories":[25177],"tags":[400385,355055,126808,449537],"class_list":["post-2319666","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-celebrities","tag-mayci-neeley","tag-mormon-wives","tag-reality-tv-star","tag-writing-style"],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"https:\/\/celebrity.land\/en\/wp-content\/uploads\/2026\/03\/Mormon-Wives-Star-Mayci-Neeley-Responds-to-Criticism-That-Her.jpeg","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/celebrity.land\/en\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2319666","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/celebrity.land\/en\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/celebrity.land\/en\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/celebrity.land\/en\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/celebrity.land\/en\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=2319666"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/celebrity.land\/en\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2319666\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":2319668,"href":"https:\/\/celebrity.land\/en\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2319666\/revisions\/2319668"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/celebrity.land\/en\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/2319667"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/celebrity.land\/en\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=2319666"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/celebrity.land\/en\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=2319666"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/celebrity.land\/en\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=2319666"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}